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B Philippe's avatar

This is a good one 😊 I’ve been scrolling for a while now and this is the first that made me stop and smile. Beautifully done.

Quinlee's avatar

That warms my heart! Thank you <33

Dr. U V's avatar

Beautiful Mind

Quinlee's avatar

Thank you!

Hina Gondal's avatar

Beautiful

PancakeSushi's avatar

Your mind doesn't have to come home to you. Keep letting it wander. You trust it to know where it came from

Wayne Christensen's avatar

Hell, yeah. Tight and visual. Evocative. The angst for somewhere, the almost, the not now, not yet. The end in rhyme.

Quinlee's avatar

Thank you!! It's a personal favorite of mine for sure.

Goodluck Opene's avatar

This was a nice poem

Thanks for sharing😌

Quinlee's avatar

Im glad you liked it ❤️